Twilight
Visions from the Hereafter: Fall of the Damned (Photo credit: Wikipedia)
Twilight
Hipster Chic, Non-Chalant Strut Uptown, Eyes Peering from Drab Tenements, Battleworn and Battleweary, Bolt Doors-Fear and Desperation Rule.
Boot-heels Beat in Time the Well Worn Cement Walks. Demi-Gods Once Walked Here, Now Pander to Only Soulless Curs.
Cadenced Speech Patterns, Revisited Patterns with the Continued Hope of Reviving Old Ghosts.
Corner Strumpet’s Sly, Suggestive Callings, Tilt Head Forward, Revealing Traced Lips, Piss Lined Alley as Workspace amongst the Cans and Rats.
Junkman Pedals Soul-Sucking Brown Dynamo, Trickster’s Darkest Void Eyes, Tracked Arms and Wrists Play Out as Roadmap for the Damned.
Pinched Tricks, Carrying Poison Home to Waiting Smiles, Coitus Reveals and Unwields Clap, Unchecked Pains-No Remorse Possible.
Products of the Decaying Metropolis.
After All, Hell’s a-Beckoning Just a Short Distance Off.
Twilight©Leonard.C. Gesinski(05/01/2012)
leng64 
May 6, 2012 at 12:13 am
Pretty cool. Sounds like Morrison.
May 6, 2012 at 12:54 pm
EWH,
Thanks So Much.
Kerouac Flavored Rap-The Piece is about The Deteororation of My Old Neighborhood in the City Before We Moved some 16 Years Ago.
I’m Planning on Giving Voice to this Piece sometime soon.
I’ll Start by Recording My Take on ‘Twilight’ and then Upload and Share the Sound File.
I’ve Not recorded any of My Work as Sound Files Yet, New Avenue of Opportunity.
Shalom…..LenG
May 6, 2012 at 4:10 pm
Very good idea. Maybe you could combine it with pics and put it on video for youtube.
Expand each thought for impact? Just thinking out loud.
May 6, 2012 at 10:10 pm
EWH,
Serious Food for Thought, Thanks!
Your Idea Would certainly Give The Piece More ‘Ooomph’.
Thanks So Much!
LenG
May 9, 2012 at 2:10 am
Wow, what a darker slice of life this is. You captured the whole ‘feel’ of the underbelly of the city quite well – or the maggot in the apple (in the case of New York). Some really good imagery in this one, LenG. The picture reminds me of Dante.
May 9, 2012 at 8:32 am
dragonkatet,
I Wrote This Piece with My Old Chicago Neighborhood in Mind.
Almost 20 Years Back, My Brother and I Bought a House in the Near West Suburbs, Just to Get Out and Past the Big City.
Our Neighborhood Had Turned from Solid Blue Collar Work Ethic to a Combo of Junkies, Gang-bangers, and Would-be hipsters.
The Picture Matched the Work Perfectly, Very Much Reminds Me of Dante as Well.
Very Much a Kerouac Flavored Piece, I Plan on Putting both Voice to the Work, and Perhaps Put Image(s) to a Video with a Reading Over as a Good Friend Suggested.
So Much Food for Thought!
Thanks and Best To You!
LenG