Poetic Fragments


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Morning breaks…

 

as the sun’s influence

 

continues to fill the small room

 

soon,

 

all of the smiles, well-wishes, and conversations fade gently

 

into the day

 

while current thoughts

 

echo farther down the hall

 

 

Poetic Fragments07172013©Leonard.C. Gesinski All Rights Reserved(07/17/2013)

 

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4 Responses to “Poetic Fragments”

  1. “while current thoughts

    echo farther down the hall” <— Really like this ending. Makes the reader wonder…what's farther down the hall? Is it something dark to contrast all the light you've already built into the poem? Hmmmmm

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