Seeking the Evens

Seeking the Evens

confluence and convergence

those daring chase any slivers of hope

…..clearly hearing celestial harmonies

amongst the droning cacophony of the day

equity and symmetry

like countless shards of refracted light

…..hope, within trails of positivity

facing an overwhelming burden of adversity

perhaps, in the end

only utopian flavoured pipe dreams….

But,

ever searching…..

ever hoping….

ever reaching….

ever longing….

https://leng64.wordpress.com/

*Note*

Thanks to Alma Delacruz Gossman for her friendship and influence

This Piece Influenced by Alma Delacruz Gossman’s ‘Struck by Your Light’ from earlier in 2013.

……. to synchronicity my dear friend…….

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4 Responses to “Seeking the Evens”

Mike Says:
August 26, 2013 at 6:31 am

The aural elements described in lines 3 & 4 are translated into words very impressively. Indeed, the tone of whole piece sounds particularly easy on the ear. Much enjoyed, thank you.

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- lengesinski Says:
  August 26, 2013 at 6:51 am
  
  Thank You so much!
  Much Appreciated….
  
  I tried my best to capture a raw response to a friend’s poem some month’s back…..
  
  Reply
riskrapper Says:
August 28, 2013 at 2:20 am

nice len… droning cacophony of the day……

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- lengesinski Says:
  August 28, 2013 at 11:39 pm
  
  Thank You!
  
  Reply